LAYOUT 1: Excellent idea and they are very dynamic – the layout is what is problematic – the colors are great and the slogan text effective but now you have to work on fine tuning them individually. Work on your spacing between the images and the type letters and words. The first two are as one but the last dog bending is not part of the 3. The final LAYOUT 2 You have a great graphic sensibility, the green dog. Green verses the radiation – a play on what we really want. Now there needs to be a continuity with the images. All at the dogs need to have the same positioning on the page – down the bottom, only a head. LAYOUT 3: great idea of doing teasers – keep your images the same and drop the dogs onto the same layer. This is the least successful fir your color. The final one is too close in value. Body text too big. 11pt is often good enough. IDEA / Slogan.
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ReplyDeleteLAYOUT 1: Excellent idea and they are very dynamic – the layout is what is problematic – the colors are great and the slogan text effective but now you have to work on fine tuning them individually. Work on your spacing between the images and the type letters and words. The first two are as one but the last dog bending is not part of the 3. The final
ReplyDeleteLAYOUT 2 You have a great graphic sensibility, the green dog. Green verses the radiation – a play on what we really want. Now there needs to be a continuity with the images. All at the dogs need to have the same positioning on the page – down the bottom, only a head.
LAYOUT 3: great idea of doing teasers – keep your images the same and drop the dogs onto the same layer. This is the least successful fir your color. The final one is too close in value. Body text too big. 11pt is often good enough.
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